Well, I tried...

Subject: Well, I tried... Tue Dec 04, 2007 8:03 pm

Yay! New sketch. Some stuff just looks off, as usual, but I think it is better overall than my previous sketches. I will be photoshopping this (and I'm working on a different pic), so I might post that later.

Anyway, there is the pic:

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Yes, the magic effects aren't so great, but they are sort of placeholders for when I edit the pic. Meh, wings are weird, but...whatever.
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Subject: Re: Well, I tried... Tue Dec 04, 2007 10:18 pm

The wings seem fine to me, it's her face that's weird.
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Subject: Re: Well, I tried... Tue Dec 04, 2007 11:06 pm

Yeah. Weird face.
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Nice!!!

Subject: Re: Well, I tried... Tue Dec 04, 2007 11:17 pm

And her legs aren't quite long enough.
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Subject: Re: Well, I tried... Wed Dec 05, 2007 1:55 pm

Yeah. I didn't like the way she looked either. So I have an update. It will be up later, because I'm combining it with a different picture.
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Where'd her stomach go?
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Subject: Re: Well, I tried... Wed Dec 05, 2007 2:29 pm

Heheh. Her magic powers remind me of Leona's slicey-balls from King of Fighters.

Subject: Re: Well, I tried... Wed Dec 05, 2007 4:06 pm

What is with you and King of Fighters, Kahou?
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Subject: Re: Well, I tried... Wed Dec 05, 2007 8:05 pm

Dont make me derail this thread about the awesomeocity of King of Fighters.

Subject: Re: Well, I tried... Wed Dec 05, 2007 8:06 pm

Personally, the skirt bugs me.

What I really like about this drawing though, is that it's neat--not a bunch of lines and squiggly lines. I guess what I mean is that it's not "sketchy"-ish...more like "rough draft"-ish.
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Subject: Re: Well, I tried... Wed Dec 05, 2007 8:16 pm

The Amoeba thimks the hands are drawn very well! And the shape of the feathers is good. The Amoeba also likes the mouth and nose.

Subject: Re: Well, I tried... Wed Dec 05, 2007 8:34 pm

The Amoeba also thinks in third person.

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That's what The Amoeba does...
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