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PostSubject: Something I am working on   Sat May 10, 2008 10:44 pm

First off, I need your opinions. What do you think about these two characters?

I apologize if it is near impossible to see the following drawing.
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Don't ask me about how I came up with their names. It just randomly popped into my head, like most of my ideas.

And yes, my art is bad.
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PostSubject: Re: Something I am working on   Sat May 10, 2008 10:56 pm

They look like something out of the Oblongs. o0
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PostSubject: Re: Something I am working on   Sat May 10, 2008 11:07 pm

Fuck....yes they do. I hate that show. But regardless, they stay the way they are...although Capman's mouth is always changing shape.
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PostSubject: Re: Something I am working on   Sun May 11, 2008 4:01 am

Make capman look a little normal. And give him a real name and don't tell anyone what it is. But make it something unimpressive like Carl.

Then when you release the first Capman and Stunner made for T.V. movie you will have a grand reveal.
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PostSubject: Re: Something I am working on   Sun May 11, 2008 5:13 am

I am scarred. In a good way.

Still scarred nonetheless.
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PostSubject: Re: Something I am working on   Sun May 11, 2008 10:53 am

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Make capman look a little normal. And give him a real name and don't tell anyone what it is. But make it something unimpressive like Carl.

Then when you release the first Capman and Stunner made for T.V. movie you will have a grand reveal.



..........................Okay. I'll have to remember that.
And I will not change Capman, he is meant to look like that. Well, not smiling like that all the time, this was a new drawing of the characters. I was experimenting with facial expressions here.
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PostSubject: Re: Something I am working on   Mon May 12, 2008 1:14 pm

I like the cartoonish look. With a bit more practice I bet you could actually make a comic out of these guys.

Or...is that what your intention is with these characters anyway?
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PostSubject: Re: Something I am working on   Mon May 12, 2008 1:15 pm

r1nn wrote:

Or...is that what your intention is with these characters anyway?


RAEP!!!! :P
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PostSubject: Re: Something I am working on   Mon May 12, 2008 1:16 pm

That made me lol.
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PostSubject: Re: Something I am working on   Mon May 12, 2008 1:37 pm

I think Capman would look better with a coat, tie and derby hat.

Like a door-to-door salesman.
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PostSubject: Re: Something I am working on   Mon May 12, 2008 4:38 pm


RAEP!!!! :P
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PostSubject: Re: Something I am working on   Mon May 12, 2008 4:50 pm

shush! you!
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PostSubject: Re: Something I am working on   Mon May 12, 2008 9:14 pm

Grimzag wrote:
I think Capman would look better with a coat, tie and derby hat.

Like a door-to-door salesman.


Also, a cigar.
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PostSubject: Re: Something I am working on   Mon May 12, 2008 9:20 pm

Magello wrote:
Grimzag wrote:
I think Capman would look better with a coat, tie and derby hat.

Like a door-to-door salesman.


Also, a cigar.


I would do that, if Capman wasn't somehow subconsciously based on my teacher. I will, however, make a character who is a "door-to-door salesman" who is a member of the mafia based on that design.
And yes, I plan on making this into a comic.
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PostSubject: Re: Something I am working on   Mon May 12, 2008 9:21 pm

Sweet. Good to see some cartoony stuff, not the same anime stuff that keeps coming out.

Yes, I am aware of the hypocrisy.
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