A short scene

Honor and Virtue Joined : 31 Mar 2007 Posts : 4279

This scene was part of my final for the theatre class I was in this year, and while it needs a little tweaking, I like it.

[removed by the author - fear of plagiarism]
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Subject: Re: A short scene Sat Jun 02, 2007 10:01 pm

aw... I really like it, Lady! It needs to be a nice, long play, with this as the ending.

I love it. The dialogue is fresh, quick and witty, without being repetitive and boring. It could use some more action, but with a little, you accomplished a lot.

Nice work! *thumbs up*

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Thanks. I'm actually trying to make it into one.
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Subject: Re: A short scene Sat Jun 02, 2007 10:11 pm

I'm willing to lend a helping hand however I can, be it pre-or-post production.

Best of luck and wishes, here's hoping it comes out good!

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My main issue right now is fear of having it performed. Oh, dear lord, that was a painful day >.<
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Subject: Re: A short scene Sat Jun 02, 2007 10:14 pm

Why would that be bad? It's a well-written piece of work, be proud that you had the oppurtunity to see it in physical action!

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My Gabe didn't learn his lines, and I couldn't save it without breaking character (I was Mindy). We had to redo it, which led to a comedic instance of me chasing him around the auditorium with an umbrella until he agreed to take it seriously.
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Subject: Re: A short scene Sat Jun 02, 2007 10:25 pm

ahhhhh....... I can see how THAT would be a pain. Stupid actors ruin everything.

A shame, it deserves better, in my opinion.

Subject: Re: A short scene Sat Jun 02, 2007 11:09 pm

;_;
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Honor and Virtue Joined : 31 Mar 2007 Posts : 4279

I am SO glad I posted this here.

My computer recently went evil on me, and I lost all of my word documents - three story ideas, a bunch of poems, and a few plays-in-progress, including this one.
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