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Subject: Private Jenkins.... by PrivateJenkins Sun Mar 16, 2008 9:53 am

NAME: Private Jenkins... or Pvt Jenkins if you wanna shorten it.

DESCRIPTION: I was hoping for a silly form of a soldier from Halo (Jenkins is a soldier from Halo, has a tragic story behind him really). But give me a scrawny lookin' soldier with an assault/battle rifle. Helmet and everything! I also want him to be horrible awkward at times!

CONCEPT: A shooter character, I don't think there's a WHOLE lot of those. He won't be super serious, I was actually hoping for him to be a bit comical in some of his moves, like he wasn't even expecting them.

BACKSTORY?: Jenkins was recently sent to check out a recent disturbance at the forums from HQ. Of course he's a bit of a screw up so he crashed instead of landing. Now, confused and a long way from home Jenkins is trying to just survive all the mayhem around him.

BASIC ATTACKS:
Light Punch - Just a jab.
Light Kick - Just a quick and weak kick.
Heavy Punch - He'll bash 'em with his rifle.
Heavy Kick - He'll perform a heel drop.

JUMP ATTACKS:
Light Punch - Sends down a nice weak spray of bullets at a specified angle.
Light Kick - Your everyday jump kick.
Heavy Punch - His helmet falls over his eyes and he accidently shoots out a couple of explosive rounds, same as the light punch but more damage and some asplodey images.
Heavy Kick - He waves his arms in panic as a live grenade falls out of his vest and lands a certain distance away on the ground.

CROUCH ATTACKS:
Light Punch - Crouches and takes aim with a single round.
Light Kick - Crouches and does a quick little leg kick.
Heavy Punch - He falls flat on his face and his rifle discharges, A LOT.
Heavy Kick - He falls on his butt and an ill fated RPG launches out of his gun from the impact and flies at the opponent.

COMMAND ATTACKS:
Panic Attack - He spazzes out and does a huge overhead rifle attack.
Bayonet - He charges a short bit and stabs the opponent with this bayonet in his rifle (it just kinda pops out of the barrel then goes back in once the thing is done).
Armor Piercing Round - Launches one powerful shot that explodes a bit on impact, causing a fair amount of damage.

BASIC THROWS:
Curb Stomp: Knocks the character down and stomps on them (repeatedly and in a panicked way once again)
Bull Rush: Runs straight through the character.
Sticky Grenade: Plasma grenade sticks to the person and explodes.

SPECIAL ATTACKS:
Burst Fire - Sends a stream of bullets to the opponent.
Crazy Fire - Panics and starts an automatic spree with his gun, a panicked look in his eye and his mouth agape.
Grenade Toss - Throws a frag grenade at the opponent (probably a set distance) and it explodes.
IMMA CHARGIN' MAH LAZER! - Swaps rifle for a lazer cannon and fires it at the person.
Rocket Launcher - Swaps rifle for rocket launcher and lets loose an explosion

DESPERATION MOVES:
Tank...Beats....EVERYTHING! - Jenkins runs off screen and comes back in a tank and launches a rocket at the opponent, lays down machine gun fire, and runs over the other person then off screen and Jenkins returns.
Backup! - Jenkins calls in an airstrike that drops bombs where the opponent is.
Havoc Grenade - Jenkins tosses a small grenade then crouches really low. Nothing happens then a huge column of fire and destruction emerges from it.

STAGE: A nice little open scenery with a crashed ship in the background.

STAGE MUSIC: Oh, I have the MP3 on my harddrive, if you're looking for a sample: Karma by Bump of Chicken(Instrumental)

VICTORY POSE: He'll look around left, then right, then raise his gun in the air to cheer, which he promptly drops, and it discharges, scaring him (Maybe have him wet himself).

VICTORY QUOTES:
1) Wha.... It's over? Woo hoo!
2) Phew! I'm a lot stronger than I thought!
3) Crazy people.... Ooo! Butterfly!

DEFEAT QUOTES:
1) Ow!Ow!Ow!Ow!Ow!Ow!
2) I dun broke mah hip!
3) Oh man... where did my tooth go?
4) What's under Private...?

RIVAL(S):
I have none at the moment... I guess give me one?

And that's Jenkins!

Subject: Re: Private Jenkins.... by PrivateJenkins Sun Mar 16, 2008 9:58 am

Heh..sounds like a fun character. I would play him! I hoe you realise that because of all the ranged damage his shots will not be doing much damage.
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Subject: Re: Private Jenkins.... by PrivateJenkins Sun Mar 16, 2008 10:05 am

Oh yea, I don't want him, or expect him to be, ultimately powerful and strong. I actually wouldn't even mind if he did next to nothing in damage, I just think it'd be a fun thing to play as or see a panicked soldier with all this weaponry at his disposal.

Subject: Re: Private Jenkins.... by PrivateJenkins Sun Mar 16, 2008 10:09 am

also, i think you should add a different behaviour to each proyectile attack, they sound cool, but it would be useless if they all did almost the same thing, like, you know, go trough the screen like an hadouken, you should make one of the a diagonall anti-air attack or something along those lines, this is just my point of view tought.
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Subject: Re: Private Jenkins.... by PrivateJenkins Sun Mar 16, 2008 1:12 pm

...Maybe we could make him the Megaman(in MvC) of this g a m e?

Subject: Re: Private Jenkins.... by PrivateJenkins Sun Mar 16, 2008 1:14 pm

I was thinking of a Cable-esque character.

Subject: Re: Private Jenkins.... by PrivateJenkins Sun Mar 16, 2008 11:10 pm

For mentioning Cable, you win.
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Subject: Re: Private Jenkins.... by PrivateJenkins Mon Mar 17, 2008 12:27 am

He said cowardly. Cable is not cowardly. Make him the Megaman.
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Subject: Re: Private Jenkins.... by PrivateJenkins Mon Mar 17, 2008 11:31 am

For the Havok Grenade i see it being thrown, Jenkins crouching down, nothing happens, looks over his shoulder, then it explodes into all that chaos and forces him to dive for cover.
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Subject: Re: Private Jenkins.... by PrivateJenkins Mon Mar 17, 2008 7:33 pm

That was exactly what I had in mind Ark! Awesome

Subject: Re: Private Jenkins.... by PrivateJenkins Tue Mar 18, 2008 10:37 pm

Updated! Check it out gang.

Subject: Re: Private Jenkins.... by PrivateJenkins Tue Mar 18, 2008 10:49 pm

Oooh cool! i like the way your character is shaping jenkins! but... i have yet to see an actual image of your character, but dont you think its apeearance would be... too generic? why not drop the helmet and have him use a bandana like your avatar instead?
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Subject: Re: Private Jenkins.... by PrivateJenkins Thu Apr 03, 2008 3:10 pm

I know you have your stage and music settled, but I heard this and thought it would be perfect for you.

Have a military style base with the flashing red lights and the halls and stuff with this playing in the background and stuff. Just a simple suggestion but it sounds like it would fit ^^; But I like what you have so far.
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Me, I always thought that the Halo 2 Theme (Mjolner remix) would be a perfect 'epic-war' song (just needs to be changed to fit the ABAB style and it would be perfect). Just another suggestion.
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Subject: Re: Private Jenkins.... by PrivateJenkins Fri Apr 04, 2008 4:03 pm

Since I seem to be making Gaiaesque avatars for everyone, to describe their characters, I made one for you as well. While it gives me the feeling more of a S.W.A.T guy, it's the best I could do.

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